https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lLYek4L4hNw
Reflection:
My feedback I received was helpful and expected. I have never been really good at presenting an idea of mine so this activity definitely helped me a lot. What was most useful to me was the fact that I did not add enough statistics to prove how effective my product could be. After reading the feedback I realized I needed to better memorize my pitch and add more stats on how my product can work for people.
Based on my feedback I added more statistics on how many americans don't make time to talk and took out who I was in the beginning because it was unnecessary. Although I do believe I can improve my stuttering and hopefully by the end of this my last pitch will be flawless!
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